I can't say I've used "initialize" yet.. So we're doin' good there! I'm also trying to make sure that there's a bit more even spread of lines so that the nameless science and communications officers (and even Mayweather!) actually have lines. Most of what Mayweather says is still "Aye, sir" but I'm working on it... He offers suggestions on maneuvers and such.
And one thing that has always bothered me is that the tactical officer or whoever WAITS for the captain to say fire, even though they've had the weapons locked for like thirty seconds. So I've got this one scene that I hope vindicates that feeling.
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