Holy shit, I got an idea for my Astroverse thingy!

Cymro · 07-15-2003, 09:58 AM

I wrote a couple of pages last night in bed. When I've finished the first chapter, I'll post hit, and I'll tell you before hand that the first couple of chapters may be a little plain, storywise, but that's because I'm sick of stories that jump straight into the action, without establishing the characters a bit first.

I'll keep you posted...I guess.

Deslok · 07-15-2003, 10:29 AM

Yeah, ya gotta build it up first before it starts to take on a life of it's own. Sometimes it's appropriate to jump right into the meat of a story and sometimes its' better to build it up slowly, different stories require different pacing.

The Lensman · 07-16-2003, 08:51 PM

Hell yeah! Another patron feels the Astroverse bug! Keep us updated. The planet shot rocks!

07-15-2003, 09:58 AM	#1 (permalink)
Cymro Religious Fanatic Join Date: Nov 1999 Location: Shitsville, CF63 Posts: 4,912	I wrote a couple of pages last night in bed. When I've finished the first chapter, I'll post hit, and I'll tell you before hand that the first couple of chapters may be a little plain, storywise, but that's because I'm sick of stories that jump straight into the action, without establishing the characters a bit first. I'll keep you posted...I guess. __________________ "Let me tell you something about humans, nephew: They're a wonderful, friendly people - as long as their bellies are full and their holosuites are working. "But take away their creature comforts, deprive them of food, sleep, sonic showers, put their lives in jeopardy over an extended period of time and those friendly, intelligent, wonderful people...will become as nasty and as violent as the most blood-thirsty klingon."

07-15-2003, 10:29 AM	#2 (permalink)
Deslok regruntled and reemployed Join Date: Jan 1970 Location: in front of the computer Posts: 1,221	Yeah, ya gotta build it up first before it starts to take on a life of it's own. Sometimes it's appropriate to jump right into the meat of a story and sometimes its' better to build it up slowly, different stories require different pacing. __________________

07-16-2003, 08:51 PM	#3 (permalink)
The Lensman The Original Patron Join Date: Jan 1970 Location: Earth, Sol, Milky Way Posts: 269	Hell yeah! Another patron feels the Astroverse bug! Keep us updated. The planet shot rocks! __________________ Everyone Booze Up And Riot!!! Milk and Cheese

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