"smallville" Teaser

Brikar · 11-20-2003, 12:11 AM

Here's the teaser for our "Smallville" project. Ignore the formatting... I can't really center stuff without putting in a lot more effort than I feel like. The episode is called "Krypton-ite".

TEASER

FADE IN:

1 EXT. ROAD – DAY
CLARK, CHLOE, and PETE are walking along the road, carrying backpacks. Behind them, a school bus drives off into the distance, kicking up a cloud of dust on the dirt road.

CLARK
Man, chem. tests are going to kill me next week.

CHLOE
You could always join the football team. Again.

CLARK
What does that have to do with chemistry tests?

CHLOE
You wouldn’t need to pass the tests.

PETE
Now, Chloe, you know that the new coach doesn’t have any funky flame-throwing powers. Nor any real powers of persuasion. We sucked last week.

CLARK
Cheating and football… two things that probably wouldn’t go over too well with my parents.

PETE
Well, for a good grade, I think my dad would sanction just about anything.

CLARK
Yeah, right, Pete, that’s why you were towel-boy for two weeks after you bombed Mrs. Peterson’s English paper.

PETE
Maybe I just understand responsibility. Did you ever think of that? (grins)

CHLOE
Well, guys, this is my exit…

CLARK
See you.

PETE
Later.

Chloe leaves.

2 EXT. ROAD – DAY
Pete and Clark continue along a new part of the road. In the distance, we hear a train whistle.

PETE
Here’s me, Clark. Later.

CLARK
Bye, Pete.

Pete leaves.

3. EXT. RAILROAD CROSSING – DAY
We hear another train whistle in the distance as Clark nears the crossing. Up ahead, past the lowered barriers, Clark sees a young boy standing squarely in the center of the tracks. The train is getting closer, and the whistle blows again.

CLARK
Hey! HEY!

The boy doesn’t respond, and Clark runs toward him. He runs so fast that he becomes a BLUR.

As the train moves in slow motion, the boy turns at NORMAL SPEED as Clark runs up to him. He grabs Clark, and twists around, throwing Clark off in the air. He turns back to the train, just as it hits him in the shoulder, launching him off as well.

4. EXT. IMPACT DITCH – DAY
Clark shakes his head and stands up, brushing dirt off his clothes. He takes off his jacket, and sees that it is ripped in the back. Frowning, he looks up toward the train tracks – and we see that he is now SEVERAL HUNDRED YARDS away!

Clark dashes off at super-speed toward tracks.

5 EXT. RAILROAD CROSSING – DAY
Clark stands in the middle of the tracks, and looks around. Nearby, he sees a cluster of trees with several trees knocked down.

6. EXT. TREES – DAY
Clark enters the cluster of trees through an impact ditch like his own, and looks around – the boy is nowhere to be found.

CLARK
What the…?

FADE OUT

END OF TEASER

Bean · 11-20-2003, 01:01 AM

What's it for Brikar?

Brikar · 11-20-2003, 05:45 AM

Maybe if anybody had read my post in the "Entertainment" section about this...

11-20-2003, 12:11 AM	#1 (permalink)
Brikar The Dude Join Date: Jan 1970 Location: Massachusetts Posts: 3,585	Here's the teaser for our "Smallville" project. Ignore the formatting... I can't really center stuff without putting in a lot more effort than I feel like. The episode is called "Krypton-ite". TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. ROAD – DAY CLARK, CHLOE, and PETE are walking along the road, carrying backpacks. Behind them, a school bus drives off into the distance, kicking up a cloud of dust on the dirt road. CLARK Man, chem. tests are going to kill me next week. CHLOE You could always join the football team. Again. CLARK What does that have to do with chemistry tests? CHLOE You wouldn’t need to pass the tests. PETE Now, Chloe, you know that the new coach doesn’t have any funky flame-throwing powers. Nor any real powers of persuasion. We sucked last week. CLARK Cheating and football… two things that probably wouldn’t go over too well with my parents. PETE Well, for a good grade, I think my dad would sanction just about anything. CLARK Yeah, right, Pete, that’s why you were towel-boy for two weeks after you bombed Mrs. Peterson’s English paper. PETE Maybe I just understand responsibility. Did you ever think of that? (grins) CHLOE Well, guys, this is my exit… CLARK See you. PETE Later. Chloe leaves. 2 EXT. ROAD – DAY Pete and Clark continue along a new part of the road. In the distance, we hear a train whistle. PETE Here’s me, Clark. Later. CLARK Bye, Pete. Pete leaves. 3. EXT. RAILROAD CROSSING – DAY We hear another train whistle in the distance as Clark nears the crossing. Up ahead, past the lowered barriers, Clark sees a young boy standing squarely in the center of the tracks. The train is getting closer, and the whistle blows again. CLARK Hey! HEY! The boy doesn’t respond, and Clark runs toward him. He runs so fast that he becomes a BLUR. As the train moves in slow motion, the boy turns at NORMAL SPEED as Clark runs up to him. He grabs Clark, and twists around, throwing Clark off in the air. He turns back to the train, just as it hits him in the shoulder, launching him off as well. 4. EXT. IMPACT DITCH – DAY Clark shakes his head and stands up, brushing dirt off his clothes. He takes off his jacket, and sees that it is ripped in the back. Frowning, he looks up toward the train tracks – and we see that he is now SEVERAL HUNDRED YARDS away! Clark dashes off at super-speed toward tracks. 5 EXT. RAILROAD CROSSING – DAY Clark stands in the middle of the tracks, and looks around. Nearby, he sees a cluster of trees with several trees knocked down. 6. EXT. TREES – DAY Clark enters the cluster of trees through an impact ditch like his own, and looks around – the boy is nowhere to be found. CLARK What the…? FADE OUT END OF TEASER __________________ "A million monkeys typing until the end of time will produce the complete works of William Shakespeare. Ten thousand monkeys typing for ten thousand years will write a Hemingway. Ten monkeys typing over Columbus Day weekend will give you a Dan Brown." http://olympusmans.blogspot.com http://benforrealz.blogspot.com

11-20-2003, 01:01 AM	#2 (permalink)
Bean The Awesome One Join Date: Jan 1970 Location: Canada eh! Posts: 5,036	What's it for Brikar? __________________ "I haven't faced death. I've cheated death. I've tricked my way out of death and patted myself on the back for my ingenuity. I know nothing." --James T. Kirk

11-20-2003, 05:45 AM	#3 (permalink)
Brikar The Dude Join Date: Jan 1970 Location: Massachusetts Posts: 3,585	Maybe if anybody had read my post in the "Entertainment" section about this... __________________ "A million monkeys typing until the end of time will produce the complete works of William Shakespeare. Ten thousand monkeys typing for ten thousand years will write a Hemingway. Ten monkeys typing over Columbus Day weekend will give you a Dan Brown." http://olympusmans.blogspot.com http://benforrealz.blogspot.com

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