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Old 12-15-2003, 04:29 AM   #1 (permalink)
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ACT I

FADE IN:

7 EXT. ROAD – DAY
Clark is walking down the road, holding his torn jacket around his arm. He’s dirty. He puts his hand through a hole in the jacket.

CLARK
Great…

LANA
Clark?

Clark looks up and sees LANA on her horse, on the side of the road. He stops.

CLARK
Oh, uh, hey Lana.

LANA
Jeez, Clark, what happened to you?

CLARK
Oh, uh…

LANA
Did you get into a fight? Your clothes are all ripped up!

CLARK
No, uh, it’s ok. I’m fine. Really.

LANA (softly)
Clark, I don’t believe you.

CLARK
Lana, I’m fine, really. But I have to go. I’ll… I’ll see you around.

LANA
Clark, wait! Wait!

Lana looks down at her horse for a moment to grab up the reins, but when she looks up, Clark is nowhere to be seen.

8 EXT. SMALLVILLE HIGH – DAY
To rock music, students bustle in and around the entrance of the school. Buses drive past after emptying their loads in front of the school.

9 INT. PRINCIPAL’S OFFICE – DAY
Principle STEVENS is at his desk, with two PARENTS seated before him.

STEVENS
Well, I think your son—

CHRIS
Foster son.

STEVENS
Foster… son… Well, either way, I think he’ll fit right in here. We’ve got a very welcoming, tolerant environment here in Smallville.

SAMANTHA
I’ve… heard of strange things that happen here. Is any of that true?


STEVENS
Well, any town has its legends…

SAMANTHA
Not quite as many as Smallville, though. I hear it’s because of the meteor rocks.

STEVENS
I honestly don’t know. But I do know that this is a good school for your… foster son.

CHRIS
Great. We’re moving in over the next few days. Is it OK if he starts next week?

STEVENS
Absolutely, and I’ll arrange for some students to help him catch up on curriculum that he’s missed.

CHRIS
…I… don’t… really know if we need that…

STEVENS
It’s no problem. A number of families move here in the middle of a semester, and we’ve got a program already in place for helping students like your son. And his record says he doesn’t have any particular learning disabilities…

CHRIS
Well…

STEVENS
It really is no trouble.

SAMANTHA
Ok. It’s ok, Chris. We want Jimmy to meet some new friends.

CHRIS
Ok.

10 INT. THE TORCH – DAY
Clark enters, to find Chloe working on one of the computers.

CHLOE
Hey, Clark.

Chloe notices Clark’s jacket.

CHLOE (cont’d)
New jacket?

CLARK
I, uh, thought it was time for a change.

CHLOE
Well, it is getting colder out. Might even snow a bit this season, they’re saying.


CLARK
Snow. There’s something we haven’t had in a while. Might be nice to have a white Christmas again.

CHLOE
I just hope we don’t get any more freezer-Jocks.

CLARK
That would be good. So, what’s going in the Torch this week?

CHLOE
Ugh, not much. Nothing really interesting has happened recently.

CLARK
Uh, yeah…

A beat.

CHLOE
So what’s up?

CLARK
I just wanted to know if we were still on for tonight.

CHLOE
Bright and early at 7 p.m. I’ll be ready with my chemistry book. You do know, Clark, that we have these things called “teachers” at this school. You might want to consider learning from one of them sometime.

CLARK (smiles)
I’ll have to remember that, Chloe. Remember, 7 p.m.

Clark leaves.


11 EXT. KENT FARM – DAY (Establishing)

12 INT. KENT KITCHEN
Clark takes a bowl of green beans to the dinner table, which is set for three. JOHN and MARTHA follow with other dinner necessities.

JOHN
The train hit him? Are you sure?

CLARK
Yeah. It knocked him into the woods, but when I went over there, he was gone.

MARTHA
But how?

CLARK
I think he might… be like me. From Krypton.

JOHN
How can you know that?

CLARK
When I ran up to push him out of the way, he turned and threw me past him. I landed two hundred yards away! And then the train hit him, and he went into the woods. There wasn’t any blood, and he was gone.

John and Martha exchange looks.

MARTHA
I don’t like it.

JOHN
Neither do I, Martha.

CLARK
What if he is from Krypton? He… he could be a relative, maybe.

JOHN
Now, Clark, let’s not get too carried away here. I mean—

CLARK
You mean what, Dad?

JOHN
We don’t know anything about this boy… He could be dangerous. That kind of power is—

CLARK
Dangerous, I know, Dad, I know.

MARTHA
Clark, we just want you to be careful. We have no idea what that boy was trying to do to that train…

JOHN
…Or to himself…

MARTHA
Exactly.

CLARK
Well, I need to find out more about him. I have to find him.

MARTHA
Of course, Clark. We’re not saying you can’t.

JOHN
We just want you to be careful.

CLARK
I will, I promise.

A beat.

CLARK (cont’d)
And I’ll take care of Pete, too.

JOHN
Pete? You didn’t—

CLARK
When I told him, he insisted on coming along.

MARTHA
Oh, Clark… Take care of Pete, too.

13 EXT. TREES – DAY
Pete and Clark are walking through the impact ditch, picking at broken branches and looking for… anything.

PETE
You see anything?

CLARK
No… not yet.

PETE
Have you tried with your X-ray eyes?

CLARK
You think I should?

PETE
You think you shouldn’t?

CLARK
Good point.

Clark focuses his eyes on the ground, and everything goes X-ray. He shifts around, looking at various things, hoping for some kind of clue. He finally zooms in on a small bit of metal and fabric – part of a jacket zipper.

PETE
Well? You see anything?

CLARK
Yeah…

Clark goes forward, bends down, and picks up the zipper.

CLARK (cont’d)
A zipper. Well, at least we know that I wasn’t hallucinating.

PETE
Clark, we knew that from the ditch and all the trees that were knocked down.

CLARK
Oh. Yeah.

PETE
Well, let’s keep lookin’. There must be like, some footprints or something, right?

CLARK
Yeah. Yeah.

They continue to search the ditch, until they come to the end of it, near a path in the woods. There are footprints in the dirt.


PETE
Check it out. Want to follow it.

CLARK (determined)
Yes.

15 EXT. FIELD – DAY
Pete and Clark exit the woods, via the path, and see a house in the distance. There is a moving truck out front.

PETE
Looks like new neighbors, Clark. Let’s go check it out.

They set off toward the house.

15 EXT. THE TALON – DAY
Customers bustle in and out of the Talon. The marquee says there’s a Clark Gable marathon running.

16 INT. THE TALON
LEX walks up to the counter, where LANA is topping a tray of lattes with whipped cream.

LANA
Lex! What’s up?

LEX
Not too much, really. I was just looking for Clark. Have you seen him?

LANA
No, not recently…

She seems a bit sad.

LEX (wryly)
Do I detect something amiss?

LANA
I don’t know… He was kind of weird yesterday afternoon after school. It looked like he’d gotten into a fight, his jacket was all torn and dirty, but… he wouldn’t talk to me.

LEX
Clark’s always been secretive. But getting into fights doesn’t sound much like “The Kent Way.”

LANA
I know.

LEX
I have to run, Lana. If you do see him, tell him I was looking.

LANA
Ok. Oh! And, I was wondering if you had time tomorrow to go over the invoices for the month.

LEX
Sure. Come by sometime after six. See you.

17 EXT. ZODOWSKI HOUSE – DAY
As they get closer to the house, a blur comes zooming out of the house and into the back of the moving truck. When Pete and Clark come around the back of the truck, the boy from earlier, JIMMY, is standing in the back, hefting a couch.

CLARK
Hello?

JIMMY
You! What are you doing here?

CLARK
Looking for you, actually. Can we talk?

JIMMY
Sure, I guess. What about?

He hops down from the truck.

CLARK
Well, uh, you, actually.

A beat.

CLARK (cont’d)
My name’s Clark Kent. This is Pete Ross.

JIMMY
Jimmy. Jimmy Zodowski. (A beat) Can I ask you something, Clark?

Clark looks over at Pete.

CLARK
Sure.

Suddenly, in slow motion, Jimmy throws a punch at Clark. Clark puts his hand up, and catches the fist, and we go back to normal speed. The shock throws Pete to the ground, and when he looks up, Clark is a few feet backward, tracks in the ground from his feet sliding.

PETE
Whoa…

18 INT. ZODOWSKI KITCHEN
Jimmy, Clark, and Pete are sitting at the kitchen table, drinking soda.

CLARK
Where are your parents?

JIMMY
Foster parents.

Clark looks a bit sullen to hear that.

JIMMY (cont’d)
They’re out making final arrangements for me to go to Smallville High. Then they were gonna buy some furniture… or something.

PETE
You were loading all that yourself?

JIMMY
…So?

PETE
Right. So, maybe you guys are like, from the same planet, or something?

JIMMY
Planet? Look, I don’t know where I’m from. I’ve been in more foster homes than I can count. Every time I get a new…

CLARK
Gift?

JIMMY
Burden is more like it. Any time a new one develops, my foster parents freak out, and send me back. I’ve been with the Zodowskis for nearly three years now, though.

CLARK
Jimmy, I’m an alien, from the planet Krypton. I know, it sounds like something out of a comic book, but… it’s true. And I think you are, too.

JIMMY
How can you know that?

CLARK
We can do all the same things. The punch, the train… Can you see through things?

PETE
Set things on fire by looking at them?

CLARK
Pete…

PETE
What?

JIMMY
Sometimes I can see through things… but… I can’t really control it that well.

CLARK
I can teach you.

JIMMY
Yeah? That’d be cool.

PETE
Aw, Clark, we gotta go – Chloe.

CLARK
Oh, uh, right. Um, how about if I come back sometime tomorrow? Maybe around 4?

JIMMY
Sure. That sounds cool.

19 EXT. ZODOWSKI HOUSE
Clark and Pete come down the porch, past the moving truck.

PETE
Clark, are you sure about this?

CLARK
What do you mean?

PETE
I dunno, something about him doesn’t rub right, y’know? I don’t know what it is.

CLARK (smiling)
Maybe the fact that he’s an alien visitor from another planet with powers greater than those of mortal men has something to do with it.

PETE
Maybe.

20 INT. ZODOWSKI KITCHEN
Jimmy is staring at a blank spot on the wall. From his POV, the wall disappears in the X-ray effect, and we see Clark and Pete walking away towards the road. Suddenly, with a slight echo that tells us we shouldn’t be hearing this without superpowers, we can make out their words.

PETE (cont’d)
I hope that’s all it is.


FADE OUT
END OF ACT I
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Old 01-04-2004, 06:00 PM   #2 (permalink)
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WTF!? - Why am I only seeing this now? Where was my new message indicator?

Anyway Brikar, good stuff! You definately have the Smallville formula down pat.
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Old 01-11-2004, 07:52 PM   #3 (permalink)
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AAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAAAA! Man, you are one hilarious son of a bitch! ZODOWSKI! lol!
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Old 01-16-2004, 11:47 PM   #4 (permalink)
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My only problem with it is that Clark is usually a little more careful than that. Otherwise, nice.
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Old 01-17-2004, 12:13 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Odd that the site didn't tell me that there were any new posts... I didn't put up the rest of the episode because it seemed like there wasn't any interest. Well, I'm glad you guys liked it. We got an A- because some of our formatting was incorrect, but the professor loved it.

I'll post the rest of it up sometime, prolly tonight or tomorrow.
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