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Cymro · 03-01-2004, 02:54 AM

Please read my shit and tell me what you think, if you don't want to read the rest of it, please let me know so I don't feel obligated to write it...

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“Admiral’s Log, Stardate 58093.3, After finally completing negotiations with the Romulans, Cardassians and Klingons, I’m on my way home to Earth, where I’ll receive my next assignment. It’s my hope that the new peace treaty will outlast the prejudice of the people who reluctantly signed it, as it’s my belief that it will be beneficial to everyone in the Alpha Quadrant, and all our hard work pays off. The abolishment of the neutral zone should bring forth a new era in trade and co-operation between the UFP and the Romulan Empire, but our agreement with the Cardassians has left me somewhat unsettled; Had the colonies involved in the Maquis rebellion merely chosen to relocate instead of fight, many lives could have been saved, as the Cardassian Union has now agreed to “blur” it’s borders. A full written report on the proceedings is being prepared. End Log”
Admiral Ross turned off his desktop workstation and left his ready room. As he entered the bridge he glanced towards the viewscreen and sat down in the Captain’s chair.
“Report, Ensign”, he ordered the helmsman,
“Everything’s just how you left it, sir, smooth sailing, not even a course correction”, replied the Ensign in a relaxed fashion.
“Very Good, increase speed to warp 7.” Ross picked up a PADD that was on the small table to his left and resumed his report to the Federation Council. Ross hated writing reports, especially on such relatively dull and lengthy proceedings, so he chose to move forward his own deadline so he could get it done more quickly, and spend some extra time on Earth with his sons. This had been a long mission and he was glad to get it over with, seeing the same grey colour scheme on board the Intrepid for two years had given him a good reminder as to why he took the job as Admiral in the first place, and he looked forward to working in an office on Earth again.

* * *

After two weeks of travel, the Intrepid arrived home to a hero’s greeting, the crew were given a month’s shoreleave as the Spacedock engineers prepared the ship for a deep space expedition into the Beta Quadrant. In the mean time, Admiral Ross had been attending several meetings with the highest-ranking officers in Starfleet. To his dismay, he’d been given command of a new starship, the USS Independence, to depart immediately. Ross was unsure as to why Starfleet had given him a starship, he figured that he may be commanding an exploration fleet into the newly accessible areas of space, formerly impossible to reach due to the Romulan Empire’s border rules. Ross’ superiors were rather sketchy and merely told him to assume command of the Independent in Sector 255.</div>

Cymro · 03-01-2004, 06:59 PM

Tough Crowd.

Arik · 03-01-2004, 10:05 PM

Looks good so far.

Brikar · 03-02-2004, 12:26 AM

I figured since I told you what I thought over IM, I didn't have to post it.

Bean · 03-02-2004, 01:21 AM

So far so good

03-28-2004, 04:53 PM

I like CSI

Brikar · 03-29-2004, 03:15 AM

What the fuck...?

Stag · 03-29-2004, 07:57 PM

Never mind dude.

03-01-2004, 02:54 AM	#1 (permalink)
Cymro Religious Fanatic Join Date: Nov 1999 Location: Shitsville, CF63 Posts: 4,912	Please read my shit and tell me what you think, if you don't want to read the rest of it, please let me know so I don't feel obligated to write it... <div onClick="openClose('3a2f65355b9cdd6937cce3a5dcfbe2 eb')" style="font-weight: bold">Click For Spoiler</div><div id="3a2f65355b9cdd6937cce3a5dcfbe2eb" style="display:none"> “Admiral’s Log, Stardate 58093.3, After finally completing negotiations with the Romulans, Cardassians and Klingons, I’m on my way home to Earth, where I’ll receive my next assignment. It’s my hope that the new peace treaty will outlast the prejudice of the people who reluctantly signed it, as it’s my belief that it will be beneficial to everyone in the Alpha Quadrant, and all our hard work pays off. The abolishment of the neutral zone should bring forth a new era in trade and co-operation between the UFP and the Romulan Empire, but our agreement with the Cardassians has left me somewhat unsettled; Had the colonies involved in the Maquis rebellion merely chosen to relocate instead of fight, many lives could have been saved, as the Cardassian Union has now agreed to “blur” it’s borders. A full written report on the proceedings is being prepared. End Log” Admiral Ross turned off his desktop workstation and left his ready room. As he entered the bridge he glanced towards the viewscreen and sat down in the Captain’s chair. “Report, Ensign”, he ordered the helmsman, “Everything’s just how you left it, sir, smooth sailing, not even a course correction”, replied the Ensign in a relaxed fashion. “Very Good, increase speed to warp 7.” Ross picked up a PADD that was on the small table to his left and resumed his report to the Federation Council. Ross hated writing reports, especially on such relatively dull and lengthy proceedings, so he chose to move forward his own deadline so he could get it done more quickly, and spend some extra time on Earth with his sons. This had been a long mission and he was glad to get it over with, seeing the same grey colour scheme on board the Intrepid for two years had given him a good reminder as to why he took the job as Admiral in the first place, and he looked forward to working in an office on Earth again. * * * After two weeks of travel, the Intrepid arrived home to a hero’s greeting, the crew were given a month’s shoreleave as the Spacedock engineers prepared the ship for a deep space expedition into the Beta Quadrant. In the mean time, Admiral Ross had been attending several meetings with the highest-ranking officers in Starfleet. To his dismay, he’d been given command of a new starship, the USS Independence, to depart immediately. Ross was unsure as to why Starfleet had given him a starship, he figured that he may be commanding an exploration fleet into the newly accessible areas of space, formerly impossible to reach due to the Romulan Empire’s border rules. Ross’ superiors were rather sketchy and merely told him to assume command of the Independent in Sector 255.</div> __________________ "Let me tell you something about humans, nephew: They're a wonderful, friendly people - as long as their bellies are full and their holosuites are working. "But take away their creature comforts, deprive them of food, sleep, sonic showers, put their lives in jeopardy over an extended period of time and those friendly, intelligent, wonderful people...will become as nasty and as violent as the most blood-thirsty klingon."

03-01-2004, 06:59 PM	#2 (permalink)
Cymro Religious Fanatic Join Date: Nov 1999 Location: Shitsville, CF63 Posts: 4,912	Tough Crowd. __________________ "Let me tell you something about humans, nephew: They're a wonderful, friendly people - as long as their bellies are full and their holosuites are working. "But take away their creature comforts, deprive them of food, sleep, sonic showers, put their lives in jeopardy over an extended period of time and those friendly, intelligent, wonderful people...will become as nasty and as violent as the most blood-thirsty klingon."

03-01-2004, 10:05 PM	#3 (permalink)
Arik Astro-Monkey Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Here, dumbfuck! Posts: 2,304	Looks good so far. __________________ The writers of this post apologize for you being too stupid to understand it.

03-02-2004, 12:26 AM	#4 (permalink)
Brikar The Dude Join Date: Jan 1970 Location: Massachusetts Posts: 3,585	I figured since I told you what I thought over IM, I didn't have to post it. __________________ "A million monkeys typing until the end of time will produce the complete works of William Shakespeare. Ten thousand monkeys typing for ten thousand years will write a Hemingway. Ten monkeys typing over Columbus Day weekend will give you a Dan Brown." http://olympusmans.blogspot.com http://benforrealz.blogspot.com

03-02-2004, 01:21 AM	#5 (permalink)
Bean The Awesome One Join Date: Jan 1970 Location: Canada eh! Posts: 5,036	So far so good __________________ "I haven't faced death. I've cheated death. I've tricked my way out of death and patted myself on the back for my ingenuity. I know nothing." --James T. Kirk

03-28-2004, 04:53 PM	#6 (permalink)
Dogsofwar Guest Posts: n/a	I like CSI

03-29-2004, 03:15 AM	#7 (permalink)
Brikar The Dude Join Date: Jan 1970 Location: Massachusetts Posts: 3,585	What the fuck...? __________________ "A million monkeys typing until the end of time will produce the complete works of William Shakespeare. Ten thousand monkeys typing for ten thousand years will write a Hemingway. Ten monkeys typing over Columbus Day weekend will give you a Dan Brown." http://olympusmans.blogspot.com http://benforrealz.blogspot.com

03-29-2004, 07:57 PM	#8 (permalink)
Stag It's me again Join Date: Jan 1970 Location: Florida Posts: 3,286	Never mind dude. __________________ "I want to do a motorboat on Shatner's manboobs" - Sam Cogley

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