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Old 07-16-2004, 01:27 PM   #21 (permalink)
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LOL. Can you make an episode where Archer tells Reed to do something questionable, and Reed acctually doesn't do it anyway? Cause one of season 3's most annoying parts (that showed up all the time, I might add) was this:

Archer: Do something questionable
Reed: But, sir!
Archer: DO IT
Reed: Aye Sir.
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Old 07-17-2004, 01:19 PM   #22 (permalink)
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It's not quite that, but here's a short snippet from "Neutral Zone"

LOGAN
Torpedoes locked. Shall I fire?

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Did you really just ask me that?

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...Torpedoes away!



As for Archer, this is a bit of a spoiler, but he doesn't even wake up in this episode. But yes, I'll take your suggestion... It makes a lot of sense, really, since Archer isn't the Captain anymore.
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That Columbia snippet is acctually alright, at least it sounded good in my mind.

Am I the only one who imagined Captain Johnson as a sort of down to earth, balding Red Forman type with a Moustache?
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LOL that'd be awesome. And it's not like Kurtwood Smith is a stranger to "Star Trek"...
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Old 07-18-2004, 02:05 AM   #25 (permalink)
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I've changed the episode around a bit, and now that exchange is between Reed and Tucker, not Johnson and Logan. I'm hoping to have the whole episode done tonight. If not, then definitely tomorrow morning.

Are you guys interested in reading the season outline I've got, or do you want to remain "spoiler-free" and just keep getting the individual episodes?
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Meh, I've never considered knowing the story before hand to be damaging to my enjoyement of something. Go ahead and post it, I'll read it all.
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Almost... Done.........
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Episode 4x02 - "Neutral Zone"

Captain Tucker manages to negotiate a temporary truce with the Romulans, forming a "neutral zone" between the two fleets - but there are crippled ships and survivors trapped in the middle. Each side is allowed to send one ship in to collect the dead and rescue survivors. But tensions are high, and paranoia is practically a way of life for the Romulans...

Next episode: 4x03 - "Colonization"
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Loved it. I thought that was way better than the first one.
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Thanks!
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