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07-12-2004, 10:12 AM
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| The Dude  Join Date: Dec 1969 Location: Massachusetts
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 |  Conjectural S4 update Just wanted to let everyone know that my conjectural Enterprise Season 4 is progressing a bit. I've outlined the first "mini-arc" of three episodes, and begun writing the season premiere. There's no time-travel, and heavy emotional impact from "Zero Hour". The first episode is called "Expanding," and deals with the newly-promoted Captain Tucker having to initiate preliminary trade negotiations with the Tellarites. But Tucker hits a wall when it is revealed that the Tellarites are interested in Earth only as a potential source of cheap weaponry. Meanwhile, the crew of the Enterprise has been split up, and some are now serving aboard the NX-02 Columbia, escorting a colonial convoy to the Franchosi sector. En route, the Columbia receives a bizarre distress call, and makes a startling discovery.
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07-12-2004, 12:13 PM
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| The Dude Join Date: Dec 1969 Location: Massachusetts
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| Here's the teaser and first act for "Expanding". I've also beaten out an outline for the second mini-arc, dealing much more in-depth with Archer's return.
__________________ "A million monkeys typing until the end of time will produce the complete works of William Shakespeare. Ten thousand monkeys typing for ten thousand years will write a Hemingway. Ten monkeys typing over Columbus Day weekend will give you a Dan Brown." http://olympusmans.blogspot.com http://benforrealz.blogspot.com |
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07-12-2004, 12:32 PM
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| King of the Gerbils  Join Date: Nov 1999 Location: Where everyone drinks and everyone smokes and no one speaks unless there's something to say
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   | What? No Nazi vs. Mafia showdowns? This is one of the worst fanfics I've ever read!!!
__________________ "Let me tell you something about humans, nephew: They're a wonderful, friendly people - as long as their bellies are full and their holosuites are working. "But take away their creature comforts, deprive them of food, sleep, sonic showers, put their lives in jeopardy over an extended period of time and those friendly, intelligent, wonderful people...will become as nasty and as violent as the most blood-thirsty klingon."  |
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07-12-2004, 12:34 PM
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| The Dude Join Date: Dec 1969 Location: Massachusetts
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| LOL
__________________ "A million monkeys typing until the end of time will produce the complete works of William Shakespeare. Ten thousand monkeys typing for ten thousand years will write a Hemingway. Ten monkeys typing over Columbus Day weekend will give you a Dan Brown." http://olympusmans.blogspot.com http://benforrealz.blogspot.com |
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07-13-2004, 01:05 AM
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| The Dude Join Date: Dec 1969 Location: Massachusetts
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| I've now outlined the third mini-arc, dealing with increasing tensions between Starfleet and the Boomers, and (drumroll) ORION PIRATES!
__________________ "A million monkeys typing until the end of time will produce the complete works of William Shakespeare. Ten thousand monkeys typing for ten thousand years will write a Hemingway. Ten monkeys typing over Columbus Day weekend will give you a Dan Brown." http://olympusmans.blogspot.com http://benforrealz.blogspot.com |
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07-13-2004, 06:43 AM
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| King of the Gerbils Join Date: Nov 1999 Location: Where everyone drinks and everyone smokes and no one speaks unless there's something to say
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| How can it be Enterprise if it sounds good?
__________________ "Let me tell you something about humans, nephew: They're a wonderful, friendly people - as long as their bellies are full and their holosuites are working. "But take away their creature comforts, deprive them of food, sleep, sonic showers, put their lives in jeopardy over an extended period of time and those friendly, intelligent, wonderful people...will become as nasty and as violent as the most blood-thirsty klingon." |
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07-13-2004, 12:20 PM
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| It's me again  Join Date: Jan 1970 Location: Florida
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07-13-2004, 10:16 PM
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| The Dude Join Date: Dec 1969 Location: Massachusetts
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| Here's the rest of the season premiere, "Expanding". I hope you all like it. I decided to go with a three-act format because of time.
__________________ "A million monkeys typing until the end of time will produce the complete works of William Shakespeare. Ten thousand monkeys typing for ten thousand years will write a Hemingway. Ten monkeys typing over Columbus Day weekend will give you a Dan Brown." http://olympusmans.blogspot.com http://benforrealz.blogspot.com |
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07-14-2004, 07:43 PM
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| Lover AND a Fighter  Join Date: Dec 1969 Location: Canada eh!
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| Ok... wait a minute here... This isn't an episode of Enterprise. You can't fool me Brikar! This script is far too good. You're just gonna confuse people. Plus there is no timetravel, no Nazis and no erotic massages? WTF!? I demand that you make this more sensual this instant!
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